
I'm francisco valdes, architecture stundent and a Rock&roll fan. as you can see, my hobby is to draw, sci fi and fantasy stuff mostly.
todays assigment is to write about my vacations, so here it goes.
I'm from San Felipe, so thats where I stayed on january an february. It is a small city, on Valparaiso region. When i was still on university, I told to myself that on cacations i’ll try to get ‘til the last drop of every day, doing stuff or going out. Things like long bicycle trips, parties or gigs become usual. Also, since i don’t like just to sit and rest trough the day, I started doing some random projects, like drawing a comic, repair a friend’s bicycle (task for wich I gained a caipirinha kit in return) and making my own electric guitar (THE Summer Project). The last one was very particular, for I needed to learn how to use a number of machines that were in my home. Drills, saws and routers become usefulls tools in the task, and a little about of electronic that I had to learn in order to make the whole thing work. The final result was not the best on terminations, But when the time to play it arrived, it sounded a lot like HELL YEAH.
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ResponderEliminarOK Francisco, thanks, your ideas flow easily, that's good, your description is interesting, I can picture you in hot Sn Felipe doing all your things. Please, ask yourself: How many words did I write? (300 was the prompt). Check these words:
ResponderEliminarusefulls (no plural for adjs), electronic (that's an adj., the noun is "ELECTRONICS"). You should always write the pronoun "I" like this, capital letter. Do not forget the apostrophes: "that'S" where I stayed..., you say IN+ months, places (IN January, IN the Valparaíso region). "Cacations" sounds like lousy vacations, but I guess it's just a spelling mistake. Need to be more careful, but you certainly can write.
Cheers,
JC